better flow. Here is the original text: The weather was really bad yesterday. It was raining all day long and it was very windy too. I had to cancel my plans to go for a walk in the park. Instead, I stayed at home and watched TV. I was feeling a bit bored, but at least I was warm and dry. Here is the revised text: Yesterday's weather was terrible. It rained all day long and the wind was very strong. Unfortunately, I had to cancel my plans to go for a walk in the park. Instead, I stayed at home and watched TV. Although I was feeling a bit bored, at least I was warm and dry.